In your Writing History Response, you described how your experiences shaped you as a writer. I am still curious about what you believe about writing. For example, I would have liked to see more sentences like this: “I feel that if you write all you can about a topic, and you feel satisfied, then a length requirement should not be put into place.”
In your Exploratory Essay, you more fully explain some of your examples. I would still like to see more genuine questions.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you more clearly analyzed your sources. In your annotation of Wooster, you seem to mix the analysis with how you were planning on using the sources in your papers.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you added phrases that help transition from one idea to the next. You are still missing inline citations for the paraphrased material.
Dear Kayla,
ReplyDeleteIn your Writing History Response, you described how your experiences shaped you as a writer. I am still curious about what you believe about writing. For example, I would have liked to see more sentences like this: “I feel that if you write all you can about a topic, and you feel satisfied, then a length requirement should not be put into place.”
In your Exploratory Essay, you more fully explain some of your examples. I would still like to see more genuine questions.
In your Annotated Bibliography, you more clearly analyzed your sources. In your annotation of Wooster, you seem to mix the analysis with how you were planning on using the sources in your papers.
In your Joining the Conversation piece, you added phrases that help transition from one idea to the next. You are still missing inline citations for the paraphrased material.
Megan