Workshop Reflection 3/27/13

During this class, my group was split up due to absent members. I had to quickly join another group that was not my inquiry group. By the end of class there were five of us which left us with only a small amount of time for each member's paper, which turned out to all be slightly long. Due to this, we did not have the opportunity to give proper feedback on the papers we read. However, Lynnsey did give me advice on my paper that I found to be very helpful. She pointed out a few grammatical errors as well as some formatting issues I had in my paper. Brian told me I needed to include questions that  I was left with into my annotated bibliography as well. The most helpful piece of advice I received was to include questions into my paper. This had more to do with the assignment given and meeting the directions of the assignment. I do not believe that any of the advice I received was least helpful because they all benefited my paper on some way. However, the grammatical errors were the last thing I fixed because it could easily be done with a good proofread. My plan for revision will start with going through each source and making sure I met each criteria for the assignment. I will add in questions that I was left with while reading the article. I then will do a good proofread of my paper to assure that there are not grammatical errors or unclear portions of my writing to make sure my readers can fully understand my thought process.